All Comments on 'Fingerprints'

by AnneArbor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A piece of editing advice...

You may want to take "had" out. It was used many times when it wasn't necessary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Better than 99% of the stories here

The "other woman's" point of view. Kind of a let down after a year of sex, she finds. I wonder how the unseen wife could not know her hubby was getting it on the side 2-3 times a week for a year. Good solid writing, perceptive and astute. I hope to read more from you.

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