All Comments on 'Finishing Ch. 01'

In other words, an absolute idiot. And this cretin actually walks free??!? Unreal.

"1*" !!!

not withstanding the moron who trashed the story but lacked the fortitude to come off anon.

This is porn, and the only thing not allowed is when someone else gets physically or emotionally damaged on purpose. This is sex, and a cunt feels like a cunt whether it's filled from the front or the back. Pick your poison. Ours/mine is dirty talk and "enthusiastic" fucking, and you are pretty masterful at depicting it. Glad I found your stuff!!

Now that I can breathe again, I can say, "that was a hot fuck session." Both were so charged up that it made for incredible sex. I noticed they started talking about doing friends then gradually left them by the wayside and concentrated on each other. Lots of hot fun in the sack. Loved it. Good, raunchy, sexy horned up, fuck my brains out sex. Great writing. Keep 'em comin. 😊

This story sounds like it was written by a fellow perv that is about 2 seconds from shooting cum all over the bed. I'll admit I got hot (along with the writer) To me it's a 5 - but I'd much rather that when she sits on my face with a cream-filled treat it's her lover's cum - not mine.