All Comments on 'Finn Ch. 03: Found'

by SyptemberSmyth

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Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

Wow your writing is superb

You really hit the BDSM nail on its head.

themaninthehighcastle almost 6 years ago

Oooh this is good stuff right here

I wish there was more to it.

You only show mistresses when they're fully baked. I would love to see a story wit a gal going through the whats and ifs and how, and oh my god, of becoming the predator.

That would be hot too.

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