All Comments on 'Fiona & Janine'

Janine and Fiona are so Incredible and devilish and so sexy to I hope you continue with the two love birds.

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga.

Not sure that it needs continuation. I'd prefer the talented author to work on something altogether new.

Normally I am content with leaving the story where the author ends it, but this one seems to have some loose ends and some opportunities to explore.

The two women really are in an untenable position. Sending the husband on long trips must lead to a confrontation at some point. Janine's submissive side is interesting and might be explored. Fiona's desire for a lasting relationship hasn't really be realized.

But if there isn't a continuation, well, it is still a fun story. Thanks!

so how do they get the husband into a 3 some?

How do they outwit the CEO and make some moves of there own?

Do they have a honeymoon trip?

More please - lets see them fucking one anothers brains out.

No husband - but maybe one of the office junior secretary's joins in.

words, but at the core, it is just another cheating wife story about a predatory senior excutive and a woman who doesn't love her husband. Well-written to be sure though.

Interesting and well-written, but you never really describe either woman. No physical attributes, no details of their clothing... How glamourous or seductive were they at the Christmas party? What did Janine decide to wear to please Fiona when they met at the restaurant?

This could have been very erotic if you had painted a more complete picture.

Interesting situation but the story seems to be wrote in haste to be concluded.

It lacks of something, and the erotic situations (the sauna's meeting, the restaurant's masturbation) are'nt really beliveable.

Your previous stories were far better, and deserved a continuation. Not this one.

I do hope there will be a sequel

HMMMMM, one of the best lesbian stories I have read in a very long time.. I hope you see fit to add to this one or make a continuation to it!!

Paul

Truly a great story with great sex as well.

Easily the best story I have read in a long time. Thank you.

To quote my Oliver Twist "can I have some more please" you have a lovely start on what can be such a wickedly exciting story line

More ,more, more!!!

So Fiona used her position of power to seduce Janine. Goes to show anyone can be corrupted by power regardless of Gender.

Well this isn't about love like was stated so it's a lie and yes the anon is correct to a point power did corrupt the woman in this story However he is incorrect when he said power can corrupt anyone I have been in a place of power in a job before I retired and didn't corrupt me my husband was also in place of power in a job before he retired and didn't corrupt him so to the anon that made that comment no power can't corrupt anyone