All Comments on 'Fiona is Marvin's Slut for 24hrs'

A nut busting good yarn.

Marvin Made Fiona the Town Slut and They ALL Loved It! Thanks for One Great Story!

Hot story, sexy, & I liked the sharing blindfold, not knowing who was next & fear of exposure.

A few errors in editing though, like the case of the mysteriously appearing knickers... he asked for her without underwear (I'm American), she arrived with no underwear. She left with Marvin in the clothes she arrived in. Then was asked to remove her knickers and was suddenly wearing a soaked thong or g-string? (I assume you decided to change that plot point after writing it?)

Still a great story & what this site is all about, keep writing! I'd like to read more of your stories!

Great story but the typos, grammar and plot mistakes were pretty bad