All Comments on 'Fire and Ash'

More chapters coming?

hoping there is more to this story, like a wedding and a little revenge on the local gossip.

Really enjoyed it but it sure leaves the way open for a follow on. Lets hear about the gossiping and subsequent reaction. Did they rent out or sell the 'new' house or move into it yada yada? Did her first hubby torch the place? So many openings to continue - PLEASE!

More chapters please. Well written story

You have left us dangling. Let's have some more.

One of the best written stories I've read in ages. And to echo the comments of others - more please!

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

An ancient plot line wrapped in a very neat package. Great job!

When I start Literotica and read thru the list of new stories for that day, I look for certain authors. One of the most underrated writers is Bogarts Boss. I have yet to read one of his stories that isn't a delight in a human way. Fire and Ash is yet another. Congratulations on a really good story.

A beautiful story. I really enjoyed the read. I also noted that you didn't get a bunch of "Anons" bitching about the story!! All comments including mine are positive, & rightly so.

Thank you for a very nice, neat, well written story

As gradually as you built up the tension between Mack and Ashley I had a good idea what was going to happen soon after she first reached his door. I might have quickly scanned rest of it to rush to the end and satisfy my suspicions, but found myself holding my breath as I read each word.

Anything that's worth reading takes its time and builds up gradually to its conclusion. This was one of them. Highly enjoyable read.

I really enjoy reading your story, especially the section with the neighborhood gossip, made me smile. A very tentative start and build up, but I can understand his reluctance. I look forward to more chapters.

a delightful and sensitive story. loved it ! thanks

mighty fine

Nice Damsel in distress story. But he didn't need a dog.