All Comments on 'Fire and Ice'

Please tell me there is going to be more to this story...I really like it...the reader in me wants to know what happens next......keep up the good work

finish it plz!!!!!!!!!!

please don't leave a cliff hanger!!

hey this was really good, please write a 2nd!!!

Right, positive comments first. The story is well-written and the plot idea intriguing. But then you just leave the reader dangling. You write very briefly about Rose and Annabelle's strange powers, briefly about their helping to control a large fire and except for the sex, that's it. There is no explanation as to why your supernormal characters are the way they are, no explanation as to why same-sex relationships are frowned on in their organisation, and you leave us with a dramatic cliff-hanger and apparently no further stories in the series. This tale is one that needs a hell of a lot more work and development, otherwise you are just wasting your time and your readers' time.