All Comments on 'Fire and Ice Ch. 04-05'

very good.

was very good and am looking forward to reading more five plus stars

in giving us both chapters. Emma's mounting losses were unbearably sad. Of course, that made the reuniting all the sweeter...and hotter, if I may say so. Very steamy consummation enhanced by the waiting and the significance in your vampire world.

A much enjoyed installment!

Adam's love for Emma is so caring. He honestly seems to put her wants and needs before his own. Over and over again he made sure Emma was certain of her choice to become a vampire. Emma for all her pain never gave up on love. She never stopped thinking about Adam and his importance in her life. That they will now be together forever and ever is wonderful but what next? Is this the end of their story? Without the "cliffhanger" I personally don't feel the rush of wanting the next chapter.

I hope there is more to come because this has been a fun story to follow.

That left me absolutely breathless. I could feel my pulse quicken and breath come faster as I couldn't seem to read fast enough.

Great story! I can not believe I had not found it sooner.

i cant wait to see what happens next, please dont take too long

WOW and thank you for giving us 2 chapters in 1.

I think that she had to be in this lonely situation to truly appreciate him.

this is such one of the best stories that I've ever read in Lit. love the romance twister<3

EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!

Bring on the next chapter :)

what happened to ur other story other was really good

Love this story!! Please update soon!!

I posted a note on the top of Chapter 6, which I JUST submitted, saying how I was wrong when I said that Adam was born in AD, yadda yadda yadda, trying to say how it made sense if you converted it it BC.

I was wrong, again. Adam was born in 155 AD. All the history and timeline and ages line up if you keep that in mind. Thanks for bearing with me!

~MisBehaved