All Comments on 'Firefly: The Mechanics of Serenity'

was great keep the chapters coming

for a couple of Gorram browncoats, probably fluffing each other off on Unification Day!

On, the other hand, sound like a great way to be patriotic and all.....

As fan fiction goes, you have the Kaylee and River down, well done.

Spot-on characterisation and great sex makes this one of your best IMO. My only complaint is that it wasn't longer. Therefore I would love a sequel/second chapter.

I love it when the characters actually act like they might an episode in your stories. The dialog and charcter reactions or on point. Firefly is one of my favorite shows and i always had a huge crush on kaylee. You should write one with captain Mal in it

My heart fluttered, and I got all warm and fuzzy as I read this. It's been a while since I've seen Firefly, but I might have to watch it again now. I do remember having a big crush on Inara. Anyway, your dialogue was brilliant. Kaylee was just adorable in the story, and River was sweet, yet so very, very naughty. I read a couple of your stories, and I have to say your command of the English language is just as strong as your power of these womens' butts! Bravo darling!