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by PhDinSB

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KillerRomanceKillerRomanceover 15 years ago
Mmmm...

Nice, I liked it. Just one critique, though: Don't use multiple question or exclamation marks. Eg: '!?!!' and '?!!'. They don't mean anything and don't have much of an effect on the reader. Other than that, good story(: <3 Lillian, KR.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
mmmm

I love firemen, and I loved your story! Excellent job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Came so hard...

Great story, exceptionally well written. Great attention to details, good story structure. Sooooooo fun

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Came so hard...

Great story, exceptionally well written. Great attention to details, good story structure. Sooooooo fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
best story I have ever !

Loved it!

flirtywife63flirtywife63almost 5 years ago
Hot

Ooh this sounds like my idea of heaven! Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story - not too long, yet just the right amount of build up. Details and structure were great!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Ended on such a random note. Add more!

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