All Comments on 'Fireman's Carnival'

I really enjoyed this story! A unique yet beleivable idea-And how great the sex would be---

In that story, she is tricked into being the target. (I think she was handcuffed or is some way detained so that she could not get away.) A specific man was not mentioned, but instead has already been used by a series of men. Also, the last line about the amount of money raised is spoken by her husband. He doesn't know what is going on and is only relating what was told to him.

So this is not the same story, but the major plot points are still the same.

Great story line and idea, I just wish that the ending wasn't so abrupt. It would have been nice for the story to continue until she caught up with her husband.

I've read this before, but I loved the changes you made. Very believable, very hot.

Kathy B delivers. Keep the stories coming...

I loved this story--very hot and well written. That's a great moment of realization, when she sees her husband in the crowd while she's being fucked and on the verge of orgasm. What a super experience that would be. Thanks for writing it.

And her face being on display, while she's having sex and orgasming, that's really neat idea, too.

I'd love to see a sequel, in which she confesses to her husband what happened. Maybe they both would decide it was so hot that she would pursue other opportunities.

Very well written and certainly struck a nerve with me, v horny! Keep them coming KathyB! ;) To Anon who left message about similar story, do you remember where you read it? Or maybe title or author etc? Really appreciate it.

I just stumbled onto it. How about a part two?

Don't know exactly what it is, but this story was really exciting.

Someone referred me to this story, and I just love it.

The wife being forced to orgasm with her face in public view--that's a really great image.

Can you write some more for us?

Looks like Kathy will earn another 2-300 in that extra hour. Holly will see to it, at $20 a fuck.

Realizing her pussy has been turned into a fuckhole by Holly, will she scream? Or stand and take another 8-10 cocks?

What WILL she tell Mark? That's the interesting question. And what will she do about Holly? OR, what will she AND Mark do about Holly?

An excellent setting in this story. ZFrom thenit it wentwild!

Kathy B sets a fine erotic scene. Could use more sustained tension. I look forward to more from her.

Multiple erotic themes compactly woven make this a hot story. A little more interior dialog from the heroine would make it even better. I want to read more from Kathy B.

what a great story.

more please?

I enjoyed the story 'though I kind of predicted the outcome but none the less was entertained of the outcome. It's too bad the story ended half "cocked" so to speak. I wouldn't have minded if I was to read more.

This is a super hot story. Her face on display for all to see while she's being forced into repeated orgasm. Great scene.

Where can I find a State Fair attraction like that? I loved your story--very well written, funny, and sexy as hell.

Iloved the storyline and it was well written. Everytime I read the story, it just makes me horny. Look forward to other stories written by you. Please write!!!!!

My sister and I are twins she is Linda40HH and I am SusanGGG. We got talked into working the same type of pie throwing spot but were next to each other. Our heads were in a locking device that we could pull out of. The first time we did this we were sixteen and the carne had us in the booth and set up. He came behind us and took off all of our clothes and as customers threw pies at our heads he had black men fucking our cunts bareback. We both got pregnant that summer and each summer after that for the next twenty-five years.

1*

love it

she got fired from a blow-job

One of my all-time favorite stories. Loved it!! 5 stars!!!!!

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nice "friend" Old bear.

I love this. The anonymity/exhibition aspect is great. One of my all time favorite stories. Thank you for sharing! Please continue this someday!

One of my favourite stories I keep coming back to.

The slow realization that it's not her husband is great! I've read the Fireman's Carnival Plus also. Not a bad attempt to further the story but not as good as the original. Wish there were more like this...

This story is great. I went to the school centenary. I had left high school 15 years ago. They were trying to raise money for a bunch of new computers. The usual, fairy floss, cakes, shoot the hoop, drop the chalk into the bottle. I walked past a stall it had a guys head through a hole, 3 cream pies for $5.00 or $2 a throw. They had a list, showing the times of ex teachers turn in the stall. I looked down,Miss Greenwood, good lord, she was 40ish when I left, I remember she had nice legs, always wore nylons, shortish skirts. When we were in her class we would all unusually sit down the front as she sat on the desk, relishing in the odd flash of nylon as she crossed her legs, we all reckon she knew, bit of a tease. 4.30 till 5.00. I decided to come back. Sure enough, I walked back, not too many people around, there she was, looking older, still recognized her face, not her best feature, always her legs. The guy told me the price, I threw 3 pies, got her with each one. I told him about my school days how we used to perve at her legs. He called me over closer, give me $20, you can go and perve as long as you like, no one around, she probably wont know any way, she is as high as a kite go out the back of tent booth. I smiled, I didn't see ya o.k., sure. I walked through, there she was bent over, still in nylons, a tartan skirt, still nice legs. No one around, I gently lifted her skirt, sheer see through pantyhose, no panties, my school boy fantasy, I looked around, no one so I took my hardening cock out and slowly stroked it. She spread her legs a bit bracing her self as a pie must have hit her. I couldn't resist, slowly I raised my hand and gently ran my finger along her pantyhosed slit. She sort of jumped at first but then didn't move so I got bolder and began fingering her. She kept her legs apart., that did it, I reached up and tugged her hose, lowering them to her knees, she kept her legs apart, my fingers found her pussy, wet, probing, she kept bending her knees, pushing down onto my finger. I removed it and bending down, I pushed my cock up into her, holding her hips, all the way up her wet pussy. Then I couldn't wait any longer, I fucked her, I don't know what it looked like from outside but I held onto her hips and slowly at first then faster, until my cum blasted deep into her. I stayed in her, grinding around, I felt her pussy tighten, then I was wet, her pussy not as tight. I pulled back, quickly wiped my self and pulled up her hose and went out the front. The guy saw me, ok, sure o.k ,she saw me, I smiled, running my tongue over my lips. She smiled and nodded. I went to leave, I heard wait, I need to talk with you. I waited round the side, she came out, were you just in the tent, I nodded, yes, former student just living out a fantasy. She hooked my arm, former teacher needs to know more, well best legs of any teacher, still look great,mm, thanks, im hungry, tell me more over dinner. I smiled, like the sound of that.

This isn't loving wives. It's non-consent. Do you really think that it is appropriate to write a rape as if it is a lawful thing to do? Do you think that it is funny? What about the STD that this greasy man just gave her? 25% of the USA male population between 17 and 44 have herpes. Obviously it's the lotharios of this world who are infected. Do you think that is something to laugh about? Why would a woman want to be raped and infected with a permanent disease? Obviously this is a shitty story.

As a counter to the last coment. This is fantasy. If its not your fantasy don't read it. Although non consent makes much more sense that loving wives.

Wow! what a great story! It reminds a little, in the surprise factor, of Accidental Gangbang by silkstockingslover The only thing I hoped for, because of the one father's earlier comments in the story, was that at some point her butt or breasts would be the pie target. I was really hoping for the breasts, but I guess that would be more of an Exhibitionist/Voyeur story. I guess her pussy is the target instead, just not for the pies being thrown.

5* (however, with friends like Holly you don't need enemies).

A terrific story...just enough...non-consentual? She consented, but just not to what she thought. Perfect erotic writing.

LOL - that was hot! 5 Stars.

Wow! That was a good one and the end was a great surprise!