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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This needs more

Excellent start...lets see more of Veronica!

sandymonroesandymonroeover 10 years ago

Nice idea! I hope there will be some more action in part 2!

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 10 years ago
Quite enjoyable

Thanks for sharing it with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I got into your story

I enjoyed this. Thanks! Let's hear what happens at the Apres-fireworks part! :-)

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