All Comments on 'Fireworks'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
phony and totally unbelievable

What married man goes to a wedding reception, with his wife, with a condom in his pocket, just in case he gets the chance for some strange pussy?

Come on, make it a bit more believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Not great

A bit too short, no build up.

The fact that the wife allready plays with them and you know that at the start leaves you with not much intrigue.

dsidedsidealmost 20 years ago
Unbelievable,

what married man just matter of factly lets his wife fuck around. Is he afraid of the cop? What a wimp.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
RE:What kind of...

To those asking "what kind of man..." the answer is...

matter of factly letting the wife fuck around? So he can too! Takes a condom along? So he can take advantage of the opportunity, even if it's with his wife! (Some folks don't want kids right away, eh?

I agree with the lack of buildup though...

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