by PolyLvr
You wrote another great chapter in this series. I like the way to developing the characters of Tim, Kim, Sue,Andy and the two sets of parents. You're proving that people can have their minds open to different ways of sexual normalcy. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Mark
After reading a really good story it is tempting to wish it could continue indefinitely. This is a really good story and it ended just where it was supposed to. The characters have been developed so well that I am sure they will keep me entertained for a long time.
I am enjoying this story line and can see future chapters.
You left off at a great spot and hope you continue it.
Thanks for taking the time to write.
Thanks for your comments everyone. I just submitted Chapter four. Should be up in a coupla days