All Comments on 'First Christmas Ch. 01'

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honeybreehoneybreeover 13 years ago
Interesting start

Interesting little build up between these two can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very good

I look forward to. Part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Needs better editing, but I liked it.

William smythWilliam smythover 13 years ago
Very promising start

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

like it hope you come with chapter 2 soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
mika

whoah! i love it!!! but wheres the second third fourth and fifth chapterat???

lovelove19lovelove19over 12 years ago
do more chapters!

this was waaaaayyy too good to not have a second and 3 chapter!

PLEASE DO MORE CHAPTERS!

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