All Comments on 'First Claim Ch. 01'

Loved it! Beautifully written and paced, powerfully erotic, and left us panting for the next episode ...

It felt like it started in the middle of something and ended before it was finished - like a few pages torn out of a book. The author didn't set the stage, just launched into Brintex activities without clueing the readers in to what that meant. And then - somebody walks in, but the story abruptly ends? Sadly, I just didn't get it.

Took me over the brink while just setting the stage for the real action to come - I hope.

Love your writing style..please continue