All Comments on 'First Date'

Can you write more please. This sounds like it could be the start of a wonderful new series. Write a sequel soon.

Good story and fun read. Could add romance and interracial tags to it

I appreciate the kind comments :) I will continue to work on more stories.

An elaboration would work well. I would love to see what happens next and how Henry copes with the two dimensions. Keep up the good work mate.

This was just a nice little story. Not one of those slamming hot type of stories, just a nice little interlude. I actually loved it. A real pick me up. Great fun.

Great story, would love to see what will be of there strange relation

Thank you to the recent commentors! Feedback like yours really inspires me to write more :) I have done other stories in this setting, if you look me up on Smashwords or Amazon you'll see them there.

But I plan to keep posting more stories here on Literotica involving supernatural creature and their very surprised human lovers. Or maybe I'll give a shot at a sci-fi sex-comedy idea I have. It's always about finding the time to write.....

I like when the succubus falls in love with a human instead of killing them. I gave you 5-STARs for your excellent story. You know how to develop a good plot and with excellent character development. Keep writing good stories like this and I will keep reading them. Retired Army NCO

And sweet