All Comments on 'First Date Honeymoon Wild'

This story needs and editor ASAP and some correction. The frequent and over use of the construct of "word - word" makes reading a pure nightmare at best and basically isn't needed; and in a few locations used as a period (.) is totally bad.

But all in all I got what the author was trying to present.

Extremely erotic and well done. I like the love scene between mom and son when she gave herself to her son, body, mind and spirit.

Thanks for the good read.

Don't like the twist in the plot.

I don't like the spouse swapping, the morning after pill, etc...very strange. And please get an editor.

The other chapters were much better. This ending is too much like being dishonest.

This went so bad. It went from love and romance to deciet and dishonesty. Also a morning after pill after telling your spouse you are pregnant is fucking wrong. 1/5

This story needs at least one more chapter to tie things up, for the two couples to go on their separate ways- preferable in the Romance genre, which is how the story began.