All Comments on 'First Day in the Caribbean 02'

by Ennis Piceo

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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Well written...

Looking forward to the continuation...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Seriously?

Come on. Something this good and you make us wait? And it was a while since Day 01. Please write First Day, Day 3,4 and more soon. Stories this good don't come along often and it's not nice to keep us waiting ;)

mcollectmcollectabout 8 years ago
Good start

I like the changing pace of your writing. Great start; please keep it coming.

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