All Comments on 'First Day in the Caribbean 08'

So, why do you keep bringing up the whole one beer thing? We get it, moderation is important to your character, but I feel like you keep beating us over the head with it. I've enjoyed the previous chapters but it seems like it's turning into a Mary Sue story where the main character has no flaws and nobody else can solve their problems.

Why do none of the women give blowjobs? He's gone down on both women he's had sex with, but both women have only given him handjobs. Having sexually diverse characters is important, but it's a pretty glaring admission in this story. I know it's my opinion, but you know the best way to improve a handjob, use your mouth.