All Comments on 'First Encounter'

by DrJones72

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fine writing!

The scenes here, in the club, the car, and outside of it, are very hot! Well written, too. Would only suggest a bit more about why the wife is interested in other women, and a bit more 'build up' rather than simply finding her with her hands all over another woman. Very hot story, tho!

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