All Comments on 'First Family Experience'

I love the complete story, but her father cumming inside her was the best!!!

I like the way you use the words and how the story evolves. Please go on and write more chapters about day and his kidden and mommy and her boy.

Just way too easy for me. *

I'm new at this and appreciate all the advice and support everyone has given so far. I will make improvements to my writing and incorporate your suggestions.

It's a short story. Of course the sex comes quick. I wish there was more. Please longer next time

I couldn't stop myself from reading this story

Father daughter sex is my favorite storyline

When he was pumping his cock inside of his daughter I was gushing thinking about how she was feeling having the same cock that she was conceived from deep inside of her cunt

When she told him to cum inside of her I was coming reading this.

I could just imagine how it must have felt to have her father's cock coming inside of her cunt and the thought of how she could get pregnant by him

One of the hottest stories I've ever read

More about them please.

I'd love to read that even though they started using condemns that they took a chance and he went bareback out of lust and gets her pregnant

...a virgin. ( Must have been studying Literotica in preparation for the event. )

Glad to see Shawn was added. Love to see you add a chapter with just you (did not find the daughters name) and Shawn. That would be interesting as the daughter and Shawn shared their experiences. Did Shawn and his sister have one on one sex or only when they were together as a family orgy?

I am always interested in her virginity and her hymen being broken. Dad "rammed" into his daughter without the pain or mention of the blood of a virgin.

great story..I read it a second time and have stored it as a favorite.

All families should have such uninhibited love for each other. Truly a beautiful story.

Thanks so much

I prefer more involved and original stuff, but this was pretty good for such a short story. Just a simple stroke story, for what it's worth. The strong finale helped too.

Just fantasizing about fucking my son. He watched me in my short t shirt with no panties. I'm dripping pussy juice now. Oh son fuck me please.

I can't imagine anything hotter than taking your daughters virginity, except maybe filling her full of hot cum

This was truly intense and well-written.... full of passion and love.

Please write more...

I’m speechless, that was so good

Great jerk story...fairly mundane as no real build up or seeking around like any incest would be...I'm sure..non the less good read and keep going.