All Comments on 'First Immortals Ch. 11'

Great storyline!

now i wonder if it is payback time for those that sold out earth???

The story is good and nice

keep the chapters comming

I am really enjoying your story's please keep them coming.

Please keep up the great work - fully agree with the other comments :)

must say it was a very enjoyable read; good storyline, great character development and a very good job of portraying the first person narrative of your protagonist.

You had a very good balance of plot and sex scenes and found a great vehicle for lots of sex via the healing and vitality aspects of the few characters who survived sex with the aliens.

You have much more story to work with ahead of you. I just hope you're not getting burned out on the story, or on writing, in general. It looks like this is nearly the only story you have worked in the last few years.

I certainly hope you're not fading away from writing.

Thanks for what you've done, it is a pleasure to read your work.

Love this storyline hoping to see more added sometime soon.