All Comments on 'First Kiss'

This was sweet. Wish there could've been more to it.

That was sweetly sensual with tender passion.

That was sooo sweettt :)

Very, very nice. It goes to show you that you dont have to have sex for a story to be erotic and hot. I love, absolutely love, kisssing a woman. For a man to describe the feelings and lushness of two women kissing just amazes me! You did quite well and wish that you continue on with this story. Cheryl

wow - just beautiful...

But I made an exception this time and am happy that I did

Nice beginning. When is the next chapter?