by StoryTeller07
Hi, keep up the good work on this story. Although the daughter seems to have disappeared for more than the 1 night. What happened to her?
loved it...and well written.
little grammar/typo/spelling/misuse of lie vs lay easily skipped over.
curious about daughter wendy. realize the difficulty of working her into the story, which stands on its own. five stars.
iĀ“ll be looking at your others!