All Comments on 'First Kiss Ch. 02'

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nairdahnairdahalmost 9 years ago
going great so far

Hi, keep up the good work on this story. Although the daughter seems to have disappeared for more than the 1 night. What happened to her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
damn

soooo hot! Loving this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Suddenly went from hot sex to a boring love story!

WTF???

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

loved it...and well written.

little grammar/typo/spelling/misuse of lie vs lay easily skipped over.

curious about daughter wendy. realize the difficulty of working her into the story, which stands on its own. five stars.

iĀ“ll be looking at your others!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A Roller Coaster Ride, Nice!

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...

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