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by Nefatiri
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AngelliccDesireeeabout 16 years agoGood
It was a good story. Confusing at times. I would suggest spelling check. Keep up the good work
Anonymousabout 16 years agoGreat Story, but....
Nefatiri, don't stop. But do find an editor to help with spelling. look forward to your next submission.
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