All Comments on 'First Office Xmas Party'

but good enough for 4****.

Hi love your stories ,do you still write them.?

illiterate cuck shit.

Screwloose, posting cuck crap for over ten years. Not a decent story yet.

MrMsScrewloose are now Mr married to a dude named John and Ms who has a house full of boy toys....after the divorce came through.

The story was so-so, but the writing in only the present tense (He takes off his shirt, so I see the light, for example) is made worse, for me, by the lack of names. The story's written from a woman's vewpoint, but she has no name, her lover is "J", don't think I saw a name for the stranger who fucked her. If the author's going to write a story, the least that should be done is for introduction on who's talking, how he/she met the lover, AND FUCKIN' GIVE NAMES TO THE PEOPLE!

That being said, I did get a kick out of "iameasel"'s comment. 1 star -- Bob

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