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by passionatebbw

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 11 years ago
Good job!

Great story!

The passion and chemistry come through from your well written words!

you have me aroused!--

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Pretty good

The bath scene deserved to be more than a paragraph. Dwell more on feelings and sensations.

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