All Comments on 'First Sergeant Ch. 02'

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William smythWilliam smythabout 12 years ago
Even better than Ch 01

But a very sad ending. I hope Tbone wastes no time in starting another series. This is well written gay pornography of the very best kind.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

It was a sweet and sad story. I wish it had ended happier. The only thing I'd have liked added would have been a bit more conversation between them. There was obvious caring and love shown in their actions. More than talk of emotions about each other, I would have liked some talk during the sex. I wonder how this guy who was clearly not that old died of a heart attack when he had to be in shape. It's a shame he didn't live so they could reunite after the war. I enjoyed the story of the boy's growth and love for this man who obviously cared for him back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
very hot

Instant hard on from the get go.nearly wore out my dick jacking off.

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