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JoanmcarthyJoanmcarthyalmost 8 years agoAuthor
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I am sorry that the first few chapters aren’t numbered. The site offers a limited number of characters for a heading and I couldn’t fit a numeric system in. It also records entries alphabetically rather than in date order.

To help you, I offer the following

Chapter 1: First Summer: A Long Holiday Ahead

Chapter 2: First Summer: That Erection Will Be

Chapter 3: First Summer: My First Time

Chapter 4: First Summer: Second Cumming

Chapter 5: First Summer: Friday's Passions

After that I put the chapter numbers in the sub-description where they should be visible on a search.

Chapter 11 was accidentally mis-posted on my flatmate’s tag and can be found here https://www.literotica.com/s/first-summer-nipple-orgasm

Btrying2Btrying2over 1 year ago

I realize this serialized story has been posted for several years, but since I just found it I plan to comment anyway.

The pace of this story is so perfect. The writing extremely good. The tension and emotion is so believable. What I am enjoying most is the point of view from the female MC. So enlightening. Has really captured my interest. Most stories I read the MC is male. A few stories incorporate a female view point, along with the MC’s like the Separate Lives series by Longhorn. This story has captured my interest and is an incredible read. The good thing about finding these installments late is I don’t have to wait for them to be finished.

Thanks for sharing this entertaining story you created. John

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I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...

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