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KingCuddle over 5 years ago

I keep wanting to be Greg!! :+))

Are you attached? :+))

Nice people having sweet sex...and growing closer? I'm All In!

A suggestion...You weave in and out of quotations clarity...

I keep needing to pause and wonder if a paragraph is an interior monologue

of their conversation.

Not that it keeps me from enjoying wallowing in your characters and story environment! :+))

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I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...

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