All Comments on 'First Swing Party Ch. 2'

DONT TAKE TOO LONG WITH PART THREE I WAS NEARLY THERE. LOL

It's almost as if English is a second language for you. Too many unnecessary capitalizations that should have been taken care of when you reposted this. Why apologize for splitting the story up? Why split it up in the first place? That was unnecessary. Subject and action was okay except for putting it in the present tense. Look up other Literotica author comments on the use/misuse of present tense.

Good story, but you need to learn to spell TONGUE and when to use to or too