by Jessica_29
I enjoyed it -thanks. I was distracted by the switch between past and present tense, though.
I loved it, I could feel Beth's longing and desire. Very hot as a short and sweet story (which I really like).
You are right- and you should have seen it before PrincessLeigha did her best to clean that up!
I will do better next time- that was my first :-)
When I wrote it, it felt like 10 pages long!
Then, when it came out to barely a page, well let's just say I have new found respect for all the wonderful authors here.
I could see everything clearly in my mind's eye. You have a gift and I hope you continue to keep writing.
Great story. It made cum. I loved all the talk about vibrators and dildos.
Wonderful story, lovely characters. What a pity the author does not write anymore.