All Comments on 'First Taste of Yoga'

by Jessica_29

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice!

I enjoyed it -thanks. I was distracted by the switch between past and present tense, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I could feel the heat

I loved it, I could feel Beth's longing and desire. Very hot as a short and sweet story (which I really like).

Jessica_29Jessica_29over 10 years agoAuthor
Re Switch between present and past tense

You are right- and you should have seen it before PrincessLeigha did her best to clean that up!

I will do better next time- that was my first :-)

Jessica_29Jessica_29over 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Short and sweet

When I wrote it, it felt like 10 pages long!

Then, when it came out to barely a page, well let's just say I have new found respect for all the wonderful authors here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great read

I could see everything clearly in my mind's eye. You have a gift and I hope you continue to keep writing.

navycoltnavycoltover 8 years ago
Great story!

Great story. It made cum. I loved all the talk about vibrators and dildos.

moimeme68moimeme6812 months ago

Wonderful story, lovely characters. What a pity the author does not write anymore.

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