All Comments on 'First Time'

Crap

Excellent story. Please dont go by what another stupid person has said here,in the comments. I have noticed some very maggot brained people are peculiarly here,who cannot appreciate,their only attitude is talking rubbish about anything.

Bloody try writing a story yourself before telling crap to others.

Learn to appreciate,big time looser

But with all the gang rape going on in India, I find it difficult to read erotic stories by people from that country. What on earth could your society be thinking, condoning this egregious behavior as if it is fun.

It is a good motif, but you show your inexperience in writing by hurried narration. This motif can be made into a great elaboration. Go slow, and add imaginations, contexts and "real-like" circumstances and thoughts, feelings and expressions. Do not make it a quicky. Importantly, do not bother what the other person threw up. There are rapists and sex-offenders in every country. That does not make the country or its people rapists. Some humans are less humans, and some are greater; every country has similar share of these two groups. Unfortunately, some, like sparkswillfly, lack this basic understanding of human society.

Your story made me remember, good time I had with my teacher, a divorcee living in a secluded house. I will write about it soon.

Carry on Reshma and share more of your experiences.

really nice.... keep writing and entertaining us....

Keep writing more!

write more about those next 9 months :)

when girl writing a sex story , then it become very sexy and good to read, for example, girl tell is her feelings,

Hey Reshma,

YOu are just awesome in naration and it really gave me a hard on.. Its pretty easy for me to coorelate as i also a malayali :-)

It will be fun if we can catchup on Hangout.. my id is jayesshh@gmail.com

with love and care

Jay

:)