All Comments on 'First Time at Best Friend's House'

by passionwriter101

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
ReefBeachReefBeachover 7 years ago
Good ideas

A fun, kinky story! I liked it but...

The action was a bit rushed & became a bit of a list "he put that into this". I'd suggest a rewrite with more sensations & thoughts. I wanted more Rebecca too. Describe her: a smooth thick bum, big thighs? Nipples? Give us more to enjoy!

Riki1942Riki1942almost 6 years ago
Wanting

A hot thing! For some reason, I have always wanted a girl to watch my Buddy and I while he fucks me. I wish we could find one that wanted to, like the girl in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Friend

Had the same experience at a friend's house when his parents weren't home. He wanted to compare penises, then fondle each other. He wanted to next suck my cock, saying that mine was bigger and just looked hotter because I'm cut and thick.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous