All Comments on 'First Time at Hedonism - Day 04'

by JayBerry

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elling50elling50about 6 years ago
Keep it coming

I enjoy your story, very well written.

rtmd30rtmd30about 6 years ago
Good story

I’m looking forward to the next installment, and learning more about Janet. She’s intriguing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it !!!

Great job - more, please !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
love it

really enjoy this series. keep them coming.

coolpencoolpenabout 6 years ago
Interesting.

The four parts together read as if from personal experience which makes it all the more exciting. I'd love to know if you did get inside the church girl's panties. Please let us know.

guiltypleasureloverguiltypleasureloverabout 6 years ago
Memories

When we went there it was called Negril Beach Village, and yes it had the nightclub with a huge round window looking into the pool deep end.

Not this wild back then.

Great story nevertheless.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fantastic!

My wife and I are anxiously awaiting the next installment... we're hoping that it's sooner than later. We are also entertaining the idea of booking a week there. It seems so over the top but exhilarating too!

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I'm an old guy. I've been through a lot and I am proud to say I lived through it all and even grew from the experience. I mostly write about my past. I don't consider it to be fiction - but some of this stuff goes back 50 years or more and so it might be the tale is an inco...