All Comments on 'First Time Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great first run.

Hot story but watch typos/ word choice. "My then grab."

bluesryderbluesryderabout 9 years ago
Share the rest!

Similar to my first CL experience. Very Hot! Also, your interest was piqued, not peeked. Just a couple typos. Good writing overall. Meant only as a friendly critique. Keep writing. I look forward to the next chapter.

Blk_CuckoldBlk_Cuckoldabout 9 years ago

Write more, it reminds me of my first gay experience only I was 25 and my lover was 54. Write more, its a hot story.

VinciusVinciusabout 9 years ago
5 stars

I beg for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Real Deal

Great and vivid story. We need more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great first time for gay sex!

Hot story! I’d love to hear about him fucking you ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story for a first. Keep it going

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