by ScottyValentine
Similar to my first CL experience. Very Hot! Also, your interest was piqued, not peeked. Just a couple typos. Good writing overall. Meant only as a friendly critique. Keep writing. I look forward to the next chapter.
Write more, it reminds me of my first gay experience only I was 25 and my lover was 54. Write more, its a hot story.
Hot story! I’d love to hear about him fucking you ;)