All Comments on 'First Time Ch. 03'

Started reading your new series after finding part 3 and I've enjoyed the development of these two characters. Swim team always places student and coach in close while scantily dressed proximity.

I really liked it, but will tess tell her coach what she did that night, and will she also tell her it was her husbands idea for tess to do that, I hope there is more to come

I really liked it. Each chapter gets better and better. Wish it were a bit longer though but i'll take what i can get. Please continue and soon. 5 stars.

It was very hot, but I agree with others I'd love for them to be longer.

them three was nice now for a next one you sure get other swimmers to join in this to with you and the coach or maybe with other of the teachers get the swimmers to turn on the teachers maybe some of them can seduced the teachers in to hot lesbian sex and maybe you and the coach can work on them swimmers moms and maybe you two can work on women in them swimmers family members to join in this to than would be so Hot what do you think

Thank you all for the kind feedback! This was originally going to be a single story but the positive comments have spurred these additional chapters. Chapter 4 should be out in a few days!

I dislike this chapter. The husband has a teenager in high school, forget that she's 18, take advantage of his drunken passed out wife while he jerks off in front of her. Yeah, the girl wanted the wife (again) but I don't think under these conditions justifies the end. He took advantage of them. For gods sake, the teen had never seen a penis before! The first one she sees is her coach's husband - that's foul! So what are you going to do illicit_writer, have one of them tell coach (or was she just pretending then that makes this whole scene warped), or will they act like nothing happened? You do know, you're damned if you do, damned if you don't. I will be watching for the next chapter and how you work it will depend on if I continue to read this series or not. I know I'm just one person but it matters to me how barely legal lesbians are treated & depicted. I wish you the best

You screwed up a wonderful story with this chapter. So sad....