by RaleighBoy
Well ~~ that was short fast and to the point.!** You could have done so much more with the story line though ~~ I mean really -- I was just getting into it real good and was thinking HJ time and poof you were ending it like a short sneeze.!^^ You know.?
WOW..!! You could of at least got a page out or so to make us ""want more.""!! ( 5 )