All Comments on 'First Time Fantasy'

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Sultry81Sultry81over 13 years ago
I fell in love with this story.

You are an amazing writer and this story reflects that. I loved it and I know I'll read it a few more times!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Camera’s Camera’s Action’s ...... Bollock’s

No, this is un focussed, underdeveloped rubbish.

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