All Comments on 'First Time for a Marine'

by NiBimise

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Boring

Just not very interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good, but could be better.

Has the sound of a real experience to it. You could add some details and make it a little more indepth, but a very good start. Keep developing your writing.

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