All Comments on 'First Time in the City'

Read it twice, came twice - and it was like my own fantasy come true. Would love to be Michael-Julia. Please keep on writing!!!

This is great story line, hope that there is more to come...!!! ♥♥♥

I truly enjoyed your story. Stories like this ,even though they are a fantasy, are much more believable than other stories I have read here. Keep up the good work !

Loved the story,I was imagining it was me.DF6

Oh what a dream come true thank you

wish that was me !!

I see hormones and a sex change coming. get him nutered soon!

Hope there is a follow up. Good writing style and plot. Nothing greater than a rich horney man that can make dreams come true. Please continue this story

Santacruzman

Thanks to all for reading and the kind commentary. I'm glad you enjoyed this little fantasy. I originally intended this story as a one-off; but I have a few more ideas in mind now. I intend to finish up the story of Rebecca and Ethan, which has 2 or 3 more chapters to go. Then I may return to these characters, Mr. Dollinger in particular. -- Becca

One of the best stories here of the new year! I normally like these more when the powerful guy ends up crossdressed and working as a secretary but this is so well paced, characterized and written that it's a delight. So many dumb tales here it's inspiring to see something this good.

This is so goddamn hot! When can we expect more!2886

I was just about to go ahead and become a man again. Silly me. I´m hot, i´ve been working out my body, shaving, eating healthy, and now that i´m a whole pricess I was just about to abandon it all. Thank you for this story, we all have to remember that there is a Mr. Dollinger somewhere ready to help us to leap into our real "I". I´m now at home, dressed and having some wine, and later I will call an ex boyfriend who will take care of pushing out of my shaved butt the ridiculous amount of "manhood" that was taking me to the wrong path.

What an amazing story. Desperately waiting for the next part. Beautifully written, and so convincing.

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story becca1983!!! Not only is it HOT, Michael's transformation is a fantasy many "girls" have and you did a fantastic job with it. Personally, I really enjoy realistic transformation stories, but tend to prefer stories where the new girl is taken for a salon transformation and a shopping trip, but your take on his transformation is a VERY close second. I sincerely hope you will write more about Julia's new life and adventure with Mr. Dollinger. Great work becca!!