All Comments on 'First Time Mistress and Slave'

OMG!

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suzanne

excruciatingly erotic on so many beautiful levels. love how the role-playing completely transforms both women, despite size/personality, etc. . . am entranced. . . would so very much like to have Fran standing before me and letting me know what i shall do next--- very well done! thank you!

An extremely well told story with very good characterization and plenty of emotions from both players. Thank you for such a good read.

Please do a sequal

i would like if mistress took her bitch out in public and

in a clothing store pulled out one of her tits in front of a busty shy young sales girl

or in a diner made her bitch get under the table and eat her while a female waitress watched

great story

remember voyeurism

This was amazing and beautiful. There aren't nearly enough bdsm lesbian centric centric stories out there that that meet this kind of quality imho. I loved it. Thank you for writing this. -Jen

This is exquisite writing. Please write more of this genre.

I'm not sure how to "feel" about thi. It was beautifully written, the affection & love between these two was palpable. But the brutality was shocking towards the end. Ive engaged in some D/s play with girlfriends but not anything like this so it terrified me. I was afraid the Mistress, being inexperienced, would cause real harm, & in the back of my mind I felt like I should be outraged at how brutal this was, slmost violent. But it was so damned sensual & intimate, loving, & caring.

Once again you've written a small masterpiece. Your ability to make the reader push tbrough her own fears & disbelief is astounding.

Yeah, I'm a feminist lesbian & loved this. Thank you, Otazel.

Good story - but IMO kicking her in the pussy is just too cruel.

Good story, and well written. IMO, the kicking was too cruel, and over the top.