All Comments on 'First Time Playing Strip Bocce'

new twist on one of my favorite themes, great job

It's always fun to hear about a new reason to get someone to strip. A believable story with a good pace. It could have used a few more details, but at least you didn't get bogged down in them, which might have been worse. I'm looking forward to hearing about more stripping games.

Nice pace and very light reading. Well done