All Comments on 'First Time Swingers'

"We met this couple, Steve and Demi in a restaurant nearby, it was a warm night and we both were anxious for our first time. We met this couple via an app for swingers and people curious to explore sex with more than 2. Steve and me have been chatting during the week to set this up, and the girls seemed to be excited too."

Your first paragraph is a mess. The first two sentences begin with the same four words. The first sentence is three completely separate non related thoughts. The three thoughts need to be taken out of one sentence and rearranged more compatibly. You should never write "2" like that, the spelled out "two" should be used. It should be "Steve and I" not "Steve and me." It should also be "Steve and I had", not "Steve and me have". With this many distracting errors in the first paragraph, I found it impossible to continue. Major proofreading is in order here.

I am going to improve the story shortly.