All Comments on 'First Time Threesome'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Sex good, however, a few other things wrong

You need to develop your characters more - oh, and a plot would be good too!

Scotty209Scotty209over 14 years ago
Great

Your story is short and direct to the hot sex which is just the way I like them. Sounds like a great party, wish I was there...

Scotty209

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