All Comments on 'First Time - Train Ride'

I'd give it more a 70 then a 50. It was a decent story, quick and to the point. You had a good build-up but I think it might have been better if the husband was awake and let the others know it was okay to look. Like "here, take a gander." Otherwise it was a decent story.

a sick story! respect ur wife!

My wife and I had a similar experience on a plane.

Perhaps not asleep, you know, both can enjoy this type of play.

If you are going to write anything.....then learn to spell! Isle is a piece of land surrounded by water. Aisle is the spelling you were looking for or should that be four! Also a plane can fly but not her tits...Plain is the word you wanted....I think! Who knows what you are really trying to say or mean if you use the wrong spelling...

5- [*****- (4.6/5 = 92%)]!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐- [5- (4.6/5)]!

👍👍!

LOVE this story.

Short and sweet.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

Why do we care that those two guys were Black? Get with the times. Two guys. Period.