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"Well I have. A lot."
And with that she kissed him again. He held her close and simply enjoyed the feeling of her soft, warm body wrapped around him. He never wanted to let her go. Mainly because he wasn't sure what was going to happen next.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe story developed well leading to the inevitable, but unfortunately the ending seemed like an afterthought.
You built it up well, and working the ending along similar lines, 2 youngsters alone both with the hots for each other, a dip in the pool then developing further as they have so much free time together
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe story is great, especially if you are looking for a story of good quality that you don't need to get too invested in. But the cliffhanger at the end seemed hasty and like it got added last minute.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoSome seem to write well of passionate sensual sex and others not.
In short, you do!
I hope we are lucky enough to see much more of your writing ability.
Orion2012almost 11 years agoI think most guys have a girl in their life that they wish they would have been with... Val got his. Good story.
H.H.Morantalmost 11 years ago... there wasn't much in the way of a plot or character development, Compare with ViloletRaes12's "After Parties" by another newcomer, subject First Time, posted 7/15.
