All Comments on 'First Time with Maggie Ch. 02'

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dizzyliadizzyliaover 16 years ago
I do hope the chapters continue

This is wonderful. Well written, the chapter has a lovely rhythm and flow, and even in these two short pieces, the reader is already given some excellent insights into these two characters. I look forward to reading more.

Leapyearbaby29Leapyearbaby29over 7 years ago
Story

How old are Louise and Maggie in this story? And what happened to Louise before? Why does she keep having painful flashbacks and memories?

If you want to answer back, mumclaren@gmail.com

XactoXactoalmost 3 years ago

I enjoyed these scenes. Thank you for writing them. I wish there was more! ❤️

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