by Louise_Loves
This is wonderful. Well written, the chapter has a lovely rhythm and flow, and even in these two short pieces, the reader is already given some excellent insights into these two characters. I look forward to reading more.
How old are Louise and Maggie in this story? And what happened to Louise before? Why does she keep having painful flashbacks and memories?
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I enjoyed these scenes. Thank you for writing them. I wish there was more! ❤️