All Comments on 'First Times'

Very enjoyable read...

well told...all our fantasies satisfied

What a marvelous story Michelle. Erotic and passionate with just the right measure of lust and lingerie.

Do share more please...

Excellent story, well written, very hot. Got me extremely horny. Please keep writing.

It was hot and amazingly sweet! Loved it Loved it Loved it

I really liked everything about this story and look forward to reading more of your work.

im in the military and just imagining this got me so hot:P

This was very very delicious...sort of how I imagine this transformation happening with a man that I can utilize my strap on with over and over...the tenderness and the romance you infused was delectable. Any man that likes dressing as much you did/do should be so lucky with how you had it or how I'd like to do it. <grin>

Write more please..

well written story with lots of feelings involved. Please continue.I also spend a number of years in the military and had to be very careful of doing any cock sucking or getting ass fucked.As the story made clean had I been caught it would have meant immediate dismissal from the service with a dishonorable discharge. While the fear made the cock sucking even more exciting it took something out of it.

Loved the descriptions especially references to the sensations of nipple play

Well done...you evoke the fear in the protagonist, and the desire and affection between the couple very nicely!

It is nice that a story comes along where the 'male' character isn't some bastard that gets mad at the 'Female' character after the sex is over and bashes their head in or totures them. Nothing at all wrong with a happy ending. (No, not that kind of happy ending) lol.

...that has a lot of potential, can't wait for more chapters. These types of encounters, either in a school or military (or both) setting can be very erotic, and that provides a lot of the fun! So far it has all the good bits to make it one hot read, you go Michelle, who ever you are!

That was so sexy, I hope that you and Jim are still together.

Does the writer start dressing 24/7 as a female? This story got me so hot that I blew my load